Score: 4

"Uh..."

submission: Joseph Stalin:RAI69+D 046

date: June 18, 2008

It's weird... liked the music though (I wonder why...)

Score: 9

"*Raises Hand*"

submission: Penguin Skate 2

date: December 27, 2007

I know where you got inspiration from!

Anyway it was a bit short, and the cutting out of the music when you weren't collecting canes was almost annoying, but the was was good overall.

You probably could have spent a little more time on it. If I had to guess, you spent no more than a week on it.

Anyway I'd love to see more cohesive minigame compilations from different people, it's a fun genre to work with.

However you took the easy way out and did separate cutscenes instead of in game cutscenes. DAMN YOU FOR DOING IT THE EASY WAY!

Score: 7

"It was pretty funny"

submission: A Portal Suicide

date: December 27, 2007

But the animation was bad, and you sound like you haven't hit puberty yet, and you're responses to reviews make you sound like an utter n00b.

Keep practicing.

Score: 5

"Well it's an OK tribute"

submission: Ball Revamped :: Duo

date: December 26, 2007

The problem is there isn't anything original about it, and the game you're tributing is available for free on the internet as it is. A tribute needs to be better than the original, or a free version of a console game, or have a unique twist, to justify a good rating. A simple clone of a flash game, while it might be good practice, isn't very impressive as a submission.

I know you're only 11 though, and I started flash when I was 10 or 11 too, so here's some suggestions and tips.

1. The level design you have is very bland and boring. There's not much difference between them, they don't get that much harder as the game goes along, and the powerups aren't used in a very creative manner. You need to work on a difficulty curve, but also work on implementing powerups in a creative way instead of a "They're just here for no reason" way.

2. If you decheck "Use compression" and set the sound to RAW in the export settings, it won't take 15 minutes to export for testing. Make sure to reset the fields for the final builds though, or you'll end up with a 40 MB file.

3. Try some original game ideas.

Score: 6

"Decent"

submission: MarcyVF's New Grounds

date: December 20, 2007

However, with something like this, the charm in the first one was how original it was (bar the fact that it was based off a commercial). I wouldn't have minded this if it did something to distinguish itself from Allen Awesome's one, however it was basically the same, but from a different person. Even the hand people, how highly unoriginal.

It was still decent though, but I prefer originality.

Score: 6

"It's decent."

submission: Still Alive - Portal

date: December 8, 2007

It's fairly easy to tell that you're better at the webcomics than at animation right now, and I'm afraid a lot of people are giving you high scores just because of the song, or because you're "That person from VGcats"

Nonetheless, it was mildly entertaining to see the facial expressions and the little gameplay bits in there, but next time you do an animation I would focus more on the actual animation and less on static facial expressions.

What version of flash do you use anyway?

Score: 10

"Fun"

submission: Vector Runner

date: November 29, 2007

You should get used to AS3, it's a lot quicker with math and won't take a minute and a half to multiply 2 numbers.

Score: 10

"*Generic Review*"

submission: Mastermind

date: November 1, 2007

*Compliment*

*Comparison to Blockhead*

*Complaint of bleeps* [even thought hey were funny]

*Comment about blockhead again*

*end of review*

It was brilliant BTW. Now don't forget blockSLIDE.

Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: [Orbitron]

date: October 24, 2007

It's not a bad game, but here are the issues

Your ship should be able to shoot at angles too, it would make it a lot less frustrating. Or it should at least move faster. It takes too long to dodge or get into position to kill the yellow ones that it gets frustrating.

Bombs should destroy bullets. When using one to save myself nothing's worse than just getting hit with a bullet after you use a bomb.
When you die you should get a few seconds of invincibility. One time I died twice in a row cause of this.

The upgrades now. The turrets are cool, the walls are cool, but the "upgrade shoot rate" and "upgrade power" have such a miniscule effect one at a time that it makes them pointless. There should at least be a noticeable change each time you upgrade so it doesn't feel like a waste of money. You need those upgrades at their full level, but getting to it costs so much and doesn't show much effect one at a time. Same with power.

Also, the turrets are by default wayy too weak. They shoot slow enough, there's no need to make them less than the ships power (and the bomb turret should start off at least twice as powerful as the ships turret, i don't see why it starts off weaker).

Sometime's I'd kill an enemy right in front of me and still die. Don't hittest against dying enemies, only alive ones. One time i used a bomb and an enemy BELOW me killed me when it exploded.

Overall not bad but it needs improvements.

Score: 1

"wow"

submission: 3D Cube

date: October 21, 2007

Despite the fact that the code for a rotating cube in flash can be found on hundreds of different websites in tutorial or source code form, a simple rotating cube is nothing impressive or entertaining.

If you could work it into something else then it might have been better.